Thursday, September 26, 2019

Gwendolyn Brooks is Real Cool

We might not be real cool, but here is our attempt at emulating the poem "We Real Cool" with our own messages.  Feel free to let us know your thoughts.

17 comments:

  1. Intimacy
    To the
    Moths & the Flames

    You are a moth to his flame.You
    Are the one to blame.You
    Are two passionate partners.You
    Are his submissive slave.You
    Desirable and dauntless. You
    Fool intimate creatures. You
    Duplicate his features.You
    Are the war in the battle field.

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  2. I remember
    To the person who left so soon.
    By: MJ05

    You were an angel. You
    were a lion. You
    put on a smile. You
    waited a while. You
    knew it was coming. You
    cried alone. You
    decided on your own. You
    played an important tole. You
    were my moon. You
    left so soon. You
    left without a word. You
    said nothing. I
    remember your last tears. I
    remember how they trickled down your cheeks like a stream.

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  3. We Real Chill
    Friends at the Micronesian Corner

    By: Marissa


    We real chill. We
    put family first. We
    respect others unrehearsed. We
    love Ariana Grande.We
    laugh together.We
    live life cheerfully. We
    work hard. We
    will always be friends.

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  4. MAMA BEAR
    A mother that took care of me.

    You gave birth to me. You
    are my lovng mama bear. You
    show me how to care. You
    are the calm.You
    are my blissful bestfriend. You
    are a hardworking person. You
    accept me as your burden. You
    give me everything I need.

    BY: Tong@nS@mo@n

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  5. Students
    A girl that goes to school everyday.

    You come to school. You
    come to class and study enmasse. You
    grade. You
    made many changes. You
    followed the track. You
    never looked back. You
    lived your best school life.

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  6. Rejected Love
    a person who deceived me

    I met you on the street.I
    had a fast heartbeat.I
    spoke to you so sweet.I
    treated you like a winter without any sleet.I
    fell inlove with you so quick.I
    created you a song with a sweet beat.I
    lighten your world,like satin and lace.
    But you cheated on me like waste.

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  7. Ballers
    at the Armory
    by JJ

    We play ball. We
    Dribble down court. We
    Play at Hilo Armory. We
    Lay up. We
    Block. We
    rock. We
    defend. We
    have fun.

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    1. I really admire your poem and how you describes your characteristic, I can relate to your poem because I love playing sports and Basketball is one of the sport that i'm good at.

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  8. Abnegation
    The swan
    who can't take a break

    She is a selfless swan.She
    is crying quietly at dawn.She
    is full of humor.She
    sighs silently at her problems.She
    is the most empathetic.She
    makes everyone euphoric.She
    is an active volcano about to erupt.She
    is a dark soul that is forbidden to speak up.

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  9. Predators
    To Hopeless
    Romantics

    I'm a hopeless romantic.I'm
    Quick to fall in love.I'm
    A rare lady flamingo.I'm
    Desperate for love.I'm
    Waiting sent from heaven above.I'm
    Hyenas that everyone won't love.I'm
    Stray mouse in a pitch black pipe. I’m
    A cold hairless cat. I’m
    Always hoping but then abandoned.

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  10. You Think You're Cool
    at Hilo High School.
    by Althi

    You think you're cool. You
    run the school. You
    walk the halls. You
    get lots of calls. You
    are only young once. You
    will lose your beautiful blooms. You
    will be doomed. You
    should show some respect.

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  11. RR18 September 27, 2019 at 5:31 PM

    Future
    The girl who goes to school everyday.

    You come to class. You
    study enmasse. You
    are committed. You
    graduate. You
    make many changes. You
    follow the track. You
    never look back. You
    live your best school life.

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  12. hard work
    the person who work hard

    by Samoanpride

    You have good grades. You
    have luck above. You
    live life. You
    make mistake. you
    fell down and got back up. You
    you went along long ago. You
    sang songs so good. You
    work late. You
    get home at eight. You
    play rugby and have
    great grades.


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  13. We Online
    The true Gamers
    several Online at a time
    we play all day.We
    Don't know what to say.We
    Stay up late plugged in.We
    try hard to win.We
    have no deadliness.We
    spend so much time.It
    should be a crime.

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  14. The Hunters
    In Onomea Forest
    by DCA918

    We hunt.We
    Wake up early.We
    Hunt with dogs.We
    Hunt miles for smiles.We
    Hunt in the beautiful forest.We
    catch a big boar.We
    Make smoke meat.We
    Sell smoke meat.We
    love hunting.

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  15. RjKinG234 October 3, 2019 at 6:44 PM
    Gamers
    Up late at Night

    We online. We
    Are the true Gamers. We
    Play several at a time. We
    Play all day. We
    Don't know what to say. We
    Stay up late plugged in. We
    try hard to win. We
    have no deadlines. We
    spend so much time. It
    should be a crime.

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    1. I like your rhyme and Good simile to want to say uses metaphor to represent to myself.

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